From 2e4d074bfc2db88c8c6c2143e76e1ef856bf1e6a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?Jaroslav=20Bene=C5=A1?= Date: Mon, 20 Jul 2026 21:05:23 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Review fixes: reword flags, gender cross-check vs Czech mod, catch 12 more leaks MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit - Reword per review: "an eye or four" -> Maj oko, aj štyri; fishing rhyme 1567 -> ...návnadička (keeps rhyme + "bait is wrong"). - Gender: cross-checked every gendered self-reference against shippy/ outer-wilds-czech. Only 3 disagreements file-wide -> Arkose (feminine), Porphy (feminine), and the hide-and-seek kid at 1627 (feminine) corrected; Filix kept feminine (EN "her note" beats Czech's masculine). All other Hearthians confirmed masculine. - Definitive leak detection: quote-normalized suffix-of-key test caught 12 more untranslated values the heuristics missed (curly/straight-quote drift) - duplicate Eye-shrine walls (1167-1170), Nomai locator, traveler arrival, hide-and-seek + ghost-matter kid lines. Now 0 English leaks in the flat list. - Consistency: "The Good Stuff" standardized to Tá Dobrota. - glossary.md + review-notes.md updated with the gender findings. Build OK. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 (1M context) --- assets/Translation.xml | 42 +++++++++++++++++++++--------------------- 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/assets/Translation.xml b/assets/Translation.xml index fdebd33..75f0637 100644 --- a/assets/Translation.xml +++ b/assets/Translation.xml @@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ ALERT. Collision imminent. Preparing for impact. - POZOR. Zrážka bezprostredne hrozí. Pripravuje sa na náraz. + POZOR. Blížiaca sa kolízia. Pripravuje sa na náraz. @@ -5248,19 +5248,19 @@ Be welcomed in this place. This shrine is a space to reflect on what brought us to this star system: the signal from the <color=lightblue>Eye</color>. test - Be welcomed in this place. This shrine is a space to reflect on what brought us to this star system: the signal from the <color=lightblue>Eye</color>. + Buď vítaný na tomto mieste. Táto svätyňa je priestorom na zamyslenie nad tým, čo nás priviedlo do tejto hviezdnej sústavy: signál z <color=lightblue>Oka</color>. We observed the <color=lightblue>Eye</color>’s signal in our travels, and followed it here to find its source. test - We observed the <color=lightblue>Eye</color>’s signal in our travels, and followed it here to find its source. + Signál <color=lightblue>Oka</color> sme spozorovali počas našich ciest a nasledovali sme ho sem, aby sme našli jeho zdroj. What we know is this: The source of the signal (which we have chosen to call the <color=lightblue>Eye of the universe</color>) is older than this universe itself. The rest, we have yet to learn. test - What we know is this: The source of the signal (which we have chosen to call the <color=lightblue>Eye of the universe</color>) is older than this universe itself. The rest, we have yet to learn. + Vieme toto: Zdroj signálu (ktorý sme sa rozhodli nazývať <color=lightblue>Oko vesmíru</color>) je starší než samotný tento vesmír. Zvyšok sa ešte musíme dozvedieť. Enter, and open your mind to its possibilities. test - Enter, and open your mind to its possibilities. + Vstúp a otvor svoju myseľ jeho možnostiam. @@ -6721,7 +6721,7 @@ SapWineMaker1I hear you’re leaving us to seek adventure amongst the stars. When you return, let’s you, me, and Gossan open up a bottle of the Good Stuff. - Počul som, že nás opúšťaš, aby si hľadal dobrodružstvo medzi hviezdami. Keď sa vrátiš, ty, ja a Gossan otvoríme fľašu Tej Dobroty. + Počula som, že nás opúšťaš, aby si hľadal dobrodružstvo medzi hviezdami. Keď sa vrátiš, ty, ja a Gossan otvoríme fľašu Tej Dobroty. PorphySapWineMaker1I’m only seeking adventure amongst one star, actually. Other stars are too far away. @@ -6729,7 +6729,7 @@ PorphySapWineMaker1The Good Stuff is less “delicious sap wine” and more “daunting digestive challenge.” - To Pravé je menej „lahodné miazgové víno“ a viac „desivá tráviaca výzva“. + Tá Dobrota je menej „lahodné miazgové víno“ a viac „desivá tráviaca výzva“. SolarSystemAnother metaphor ruined in the name of scientific accuracy. @@ -6773,7 +6773,7 @@ WhatsUpI’ve just finished sealing up another batch of sap wine for aging. I like to begin aging a batch on the day of a significant occasion, you know! - Práve som dokončil zapečatenie ďalšej dávky miazgového vína na dozrievanie. Rád začínam nechávať dávku dozrievať v deň významnej udalosti, vieš! + Práve som dokončila zapečatenie ďalšej dávky miazgového vína na dozrievanie. Rada začínam nechávať dávku dozrievať v deň významnej udalosti, vieš! WhatsUpThat’s why there are so many bottles labeled “structural collapse” and “house fire.” @@ -6785,7 +6785,7 @@ SapWineMaker3Oh my, and here I thought I’d heard your ship take off. Was your adventure only a short one? - Ale, a ja som si myslel, že som počul tvoju loď odštartovať. Bolo tvoje dobrodružstvo také krátke? + Ale, a ja som si myslela, že som počula tvoju loď odštartovať. Bolo tvoje dobrodružstvo také krátke? Riebeck_AttlerockRecordingOkay, wow. <i>Wow.</i> I’ve seen this ruin in other travelers’ pictures, but seeing it for myself... @@ -6801,7 +6801,7 @@ Riebeck_AttlerockRecordingSo this is some kind of Nomai “locator.” It can point out the different planets - which is incredibly cool, by the way - but from what little I can understand of the writing here, I think it was built to try to find something specific? - So this is some kind of Nomai "locator." It can point out the different planets - which is incredibly cool, by the way - but from what little I can understand of the writing here, I think it was built to try to find something specific? + Takže toto je nejaký druh „lokátora“ Nomai. Dokáže ukázať jednotlivé planéty – čo je mimochodom neuveriteľne super – ale z toho mála, čo tu z písma chápem, si myslím, že bol postavený, aby sa pokúsil nájsť niečo konkrétne? Riebeck_AttlerockRecordingI’m not sure. I also was able to translate something about the south pole of Brittle Hollow, so I’ll fly there to see if I can learn more. @@ -6813,7 +6813,7 @@ RiebecksJournalThe journey here from the south pole has been, um... I’m going to go with “harrowing”, because of the, um, all of the meteors. But hey, at least I made it here unconcussed and not on fire! - The journey here from the south pole has been, um... I’m going to go with "harrowing," because of the, um, all of the meteors. But hey, at least I made it here unconcussed and not on fire! + Cesta sem od južného pólu bola, ehm... poviem to slovom „desivá“, pre tie, ehm, všetky tie meteory. Ale hej, aspoň som sem dorazil bez otrasu mozgu a nie v plameňoch! RiebecksJournalOkay, let’s see... I poked around a little, and there’s some sort of old Nomai path that starts across from my campsite, inside the ruined building with trees growing out of it. @@ -7085,7 +7085,7 @@ Spinel11Fishing song, fishing song... Geez, I think my bait is wrong. - Rybárska pesnička, rybárska pesnička... ejha, mám asi zlú návnadu, to je smola celička. + Rybárska pesnička, rybárska pesnička... ech, asi mi nesedí táto návnadička. Spinel11What are you up to? @@ -7297,7 +7297,7 @@ AgreeToPlayWoohoo! Okay, here are the rules. Galena and me will hide with these radios, and you’ll use your signalscope to find us. - Woohoo! Okay, here are the rules. Galena and me will hide with these radios, and you’ll use your Signalscope to find us. + Juchú! Dobre, tu sú pravidlá. Galena a ja sa schováme s týmito vysielačkami a ty nás nájdeš svojím Signáloskopom. AgreeToPlayLast one to be found wins! Okay, close your eyes and start counting! @@ -7325,7 +7325,7 @@ AlreadyFoundYouI wanted to hide in the observatory, but Hornfels said I was “making a nuisance of myself.” - I wanted to hide in the observatory, but Hornfels said I was "making a nuisance of myself." + Chcela som sa schovať v observatóriu, ale Hornfels povedal, že „len otravujem“. PlayedTheGameHullo, astronaut! @@ -7541,11 +7541,11 @@ Probe1Yeah, they were on firewatch with the old scout launcher and saw smoke, so they went to check it out. “Safety first,” right? - Yeah, they were on firewatch with the old scout launcher and saw smoke, so they went to check it out. "Safety first," right? + Hej, bol na hliadke proti požiaru so starým odpaľovačom skauta a videl dym, tak to šiel skontrolovať. „Bezpečnosť predovšetkým“, však? Probe1...No, I’m kidding. I said that to Tektite once. Pretty rude how long they laughed for, if you ask me. - ...No, I'm kidding. I said that to Tektite once. Pretty rude how long they laughed for, if you ask me. + ...Nie, žartujem. To som raz povedal Tektitovi. Dosť neslušné, ako dlho sa smial, ak sa mňa pýtaš. Probe2Probably only a little. Tektite checked out the crash site with the old firewatch scout launcher and saw smoke, so they headed over to stamp out any leftover fires. @@ -7581,7 +7581,7 @@ Arkose1You know the patch of ghost matter inside this fence? Gossan said it used to be bigger when they were a hatchling. ’Cause ghost matter evaporates. - You know the patch of ghost matter inside this fence? Gossan said it used to be bigger when they were a hatchling. 'Cause ghost matter evaporates. + Vieš o tom kúsku prízračnej hmoty za týmto plotom? Gossan hovoril, že keď bol mláďa, býval väčší. Lebo prízračná hmota sa vyparuje. Arkose1It just takes a su-<Pause=1>u-<Pause=1>u-<Pause=1>per long time to go away. @@ -7589,7 +7589,7 @@ Arkose1I hope there’s still ghost matter in the village when I’m a grown-up. Ghost matter is awesome! - Dúfam, že keď budem veľký, bude v dedine ešte prízračná hmota. Prízračná hmota je úžasná! + Dúfam, že keď budem veľká, bude v dedine ešte prízračná hmota. Prízračná hmota je úžasná! ArkoseArkose1Ghost matter is super cool. It’ll burn the heck out of you! @@ -7605,7 +7605,7 @@ Arkose2Yeah! I heard touching it hurts so bad it feels like your whole hand’s on fire! - Hej! Počul som, že keď sa jej dotkneš, bolí to tak strašne, akoby ti horela celá ruka! + Hej! Počula som, že keď sa jej dotkneš, bolí to tak strašne, akoby ti horela celá ruka! Arkose2Try not to walk into any in space, okay? That sounds bad and painful. @@ -7613,7 +7613,7 @@ Arkose3Uhhh, obviously? That’s what makes it so <i>awesome</i>? Geez, I’m not dumb enough to <i>touch</i> it. - Uhhh, obviously? That's what makes it so <i>awesome</i>? Geez, I'm not dumb enough to <i>touch</i> it. + Uhhh, no jasné? Práve to je na tom také <i>super</i>? Ježiš, nie som taká hlúpa, aby som sa jej <i>dotkla</i>. Arkose3Ugh, you’re such a grown-up. @@ -8861,7 +8861,7 @@ ChertIntroExplanationWhat’s weird is I’ve actually seen a couple of supernovae today. Usually, I’d be fortunate to see just one. Keep an eye or four on the stars, and maybe you’ll spot one yourself! - Zvláštne je, že som dnes vlastne videl hneď niekoľko supernov. Zvyčajne by som mal šťastie, keby som videl čo i len jednu. Maj oči — pokojne aj štyri — na hviezdach a možno nejakú zbadáš aj ty! + Zvláštne je, že som dnes vlastne videl hneď niekoľko supernov. Zvyčajne by som mal šťastie, keby som videl čo i len jednu. Maj oko, aj štyri, na hviezdach a možno nejakú zbadáš aj ty! QuestionsTell me, what can I do for you?